Tuesday, November 14, 2023

Curiosity 22: "Touch me"—two poems

Yesterday I forgot to post, so today I'll make up for it with two. Because I'm a little obsessive that way. This will be a simple offering, based on this morning's meeting with my monthly poetry group. We met through poet Mark Doty (a wonderful poet whom I've quoted numerous times, such as here) and have been coming together ever since to share and discuss our work—for three years now. It's always a breath of creative fresh air and inspiration.

Today, one of our group, Anastasia Vassos, presented an ekphrastic poem (a poem sparked by a work of art), in this case playing off a poem by Henri Cole, "Carwash." And the last phrase of that poem, Shirley Brewer noted, echoed a poem by Stanley Kunitz, "Touch Me." So: here those two poems are.

Carwash

I love the iridescent tricolor slime
that squirts all over my Honda in random
yet purposeful patterns as I sit in the semi-
dark of the "touch-free" carwash with you.
Listening to the undercarriage blast, I think,
"Love changes and will not be commanded."
I smile at the long flesh-colored tentacles waving
at us like passengers waving good-bye.
Water isn't shaped like a river or ocean;
it mists invisibly against metal and glass.
In the corridor of green unnatural lights
recalling the lunatic asylum, how can I
defend myself against what I want?
Lay your head in my lap. Touch me.

                                        —Henri Cole

Touch Me

Summer is late, my heart.
Words plucked out of the air
some forty years ago
when I was wild with love
and torn almost in two
scatter like leaves this night
of whistling wind and rain.
It is my heart that's late,
it is my song that's flown.
Outdoors all afternoon
under a gunmetal sky
staking my garden down,
I kneeled to the crickets trilling
underfoot as if about
to burst from their crusty shells;
and like a child again
marveled to hear so clear
and brave a music pour
from such a small machine.
What makes the engine go?
Desire, desire, desire.
The longing for the dance
stirs in the buried life.
One season only,
      and it's done.
So let the battered old willow
thrash against the windowpanes
and the house timbers creak.
Darling, do you remember
the man you married? Touch me,
remind me who I am.

                                        —Stanley Kunitz

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